TIME OR SPACE SCENE 1
1. INT. SMALL KITCHEN-LATE MORNING
Diegetic, western style, tinny
guitar music plays.
CAMERA
TRACKS INTO
2. INT. SMALL LIVING ROOM
Music gets louder as the camera
gets closer to a small radio on a sideboard.
CAMERA
TRACKS
3. EXT. PATIO
Music gets quieter again, but still
audible, and the camera comes up behind JON rocking in his rocking chair.
JON
SMUDGE! Here boy!
SMUDGE! Here boy!
A dog comes in from outside the
shot with a small object in his mouth.
CUT
Close up of smudge. SMUDGE drops
the object and barks.
CUT
Mid shot of JON as he picks up the
object. He inspects the underside and sighs.
JON
Good boy SMUDGE.
Good boy SMUDGE.
4. EXT. DESERT
Slow, non-diegetic
beeping noise begins and JON quickly scoops up SMUDGE and runs towards a
vehicle similar to a dune buggy.
CUT
Far shot of the
house exploding and JON and SMUDGE driving towards the camera in the buggy.
CUT
Over the shoulder
shot of JON looking at the burning remains of the house. He turns around to
face the camera and crouches down to pet SMUDGE.
JON
Looks like they’ve found us boy.
Looks like they’ve found us boy.
Well done for some excellent work here - I NEED TO SEE YOUR RE-DRAFTED FILM ANALYSIS AND YOUR STORYBOARDS - POSTED ON THIS BLOG PLEASE - BY THE END OF THE WEEK PLEASE.
ReplyDeleteWell done on all your hard work this term.